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What about this flyer? CHECK THE ENGLISH AS I SPEAK SPANISH PLEASE!?

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1. The only thing i would change is instead of saying "grow you business" say "expand"
2. bueno
3. that's really good ad :] just make sure you specifi when you say "you can reduce up to 5"--->reduce up too 5 what?
4. Looks good from a language aspect... From a marketing aspect I'd cut out ALOT of words, make it simple. They'll ask questions later.
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7. What about this flyer? CHECK THE ENGLISH AS I SPEAK SPANISH PLEASE!? • Tired and overworked? • Do you want to grow your business and make it sounds more professional? • Do you spend a lot of money in costs of operation? Let Us Help You Grow Your Business Smart VOS Virtual Office Solutions Smart VOS is a solid organization whose core principles reside in offering virtual office solutions for your business at competitive prices. The structure of the company has been customized to fit the needs of today’s professional, offering administrative solutions for you or your business. What we offer? Smart VOS bilingual STAFF will handle each of your calls in a prompt, professional and expert manner, will coordinate your events, take customers' orders, plan a trip for you, and call your customers whenever you need, using your own local phone or toll free number with customizable scripts, voicemail, electronic fax, call forwarding and many other benefits! Which is the difference from a traditional receptionist? Basically the costs of operation, you can reduce up to 5
8. where it says "what we offer?" it should say "What do we offer." There is no word for do in spanish so I understand why you left it out....I took spanish 1. STAFF should read staff. no caps needed Then it says "will coordinate your events" it should say we will....you have to put the subject also start another sentence with that. So...We will coordinate your events, take customers oders, plan a trip for you, and call your customers when necessary with your own local phone or toll free number. We offer customizable scrips, voicemail, electronic fax, call fowarding and many other benefits! and at the end it just ends...so i'm wondering if you have it all there
9. On the second line it should be sound not soundS. I don't know about business but I think the third line should be "Do you spend a lot of money on operation costs?" and it should be "what do we offer?' or just "what we offer" customers' orders
10. Mucho bueno, pero cinco que?
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12. Do you want to grow your business and make it *sound* more professional?